What a post should NOT look like

Here is an example of a very ghetto post:

“hey people, im back from summer camp, so wer havin a practis battle tommorow, at our servr, at 3:09. so see ya there.”

-G98

Problems With This Post

A) Grammar is not used properly,

B) The post has no complexity and gives no detail

C) There are very little puctuation

D) 3:09 can mean 6:09 in some places.

E) Many spelling errors.

F) The actual post does not state the  home server,

 

Post 2

Come to  my site ! Come to my site! Link:__________________.

Come to my party! Come to my party! Details:__________________.

 

Problems with this post

A) The CPUN is not some place to advertise your personal stuff, it is for ARMY stuff only

B) Parties and other sites are your buisness, not the CPUN’s.

 

-g98


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One Response

  1. You sound like a language arts teacher.

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